When your commitment is deeper than sea.
This poem is about a shield and the blade, who protects each other in every battlefield, whereas they play a role of rivalries too towards opposite parties. Without each other they are incomplete like mountain without peak. In this I tried to portray man as a shield whereas a woman is playing a role of blade…will I be able to present it the way I thought of it?
And your ambition is taller than the mountains.

He is a Shield, hard, tough, can bear any pain, any wound, no one can break him easily, he is mend to protect, to protect his woman, to protect his love from the attack in battlefield of life.
She is fierce, a blade whose blaze taking away the vision of the rivalries with her glimpse in the battlefield of life, ready to sacrifice herself for her man, her love.
He is stiff while protecting her, she is sharp holding every attack with her pointing edge, they both were fighting for each other, for there love from there own kinds.
They are tired but the determination is strong, they are falling in front of each other but life and love inside in there heart is still alive, they are lacking visions but the ray of hope is all they can still see.
They rise once again for there love and fought till the end, battle of life is over now, they are together lying on the same ground watching each other, feeling each other’s breathe and heartbeats.
They are happy, they won the battle and stayed strong till the end together. He the shield is covered with rust now and She the blade is broken from the side.
They are smiling and closed there eyes, they want to take rest as the battle is over and there love stays strong till last.
A shield and the blade, I wonder how deeply they loved each other but never expressed all they did protecting and saving each in every battle which life planned for them .
Oh Ritika! I woke up this morning hearing the word “Shielded”. Your writing is so perfectly timed for me. It’s stunning and so beautifully crafted! Thank you for blessing us.
❤️Michele
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Thank you so much for beautiful compliment full of blessings Michele. I am blessed that my writing makes you happy. God bless you always with more and more❤️❤️ lots of love.
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Love is making the well-being of the other as yourself. You described it well, shield and sword.
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Thank you so much Gerry for appreciating it with your beautiful words. I am happy that I described it well and you like it. God bless you.
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Wow. I loved this. I especially liked that you did not go with the “traditional” symbolism of man as sword (long, pointy object :-). I love woman as the sword and man as the shield and the combination of working together and yet, very different. Well done.
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Thank you so much Jane for you wonderful compliment. I am glad that you like my effort to portray love in different form and figure. Keep encouraging me like that. God bless you.💛
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Nominated you for an award at https://musingsbyamedstudent.wordpress.com/2020/07/12/two-awards/
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Thank you so much for this Shruti. I am grateful to you for nominating me. I ll definitely participate in it and proceed it further. God bless you 💛
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We are all ninjas and social commandos ,commitment and bindings are really making us responsible or rather to be,we are fighting a battle an imaginary sward and shield to protect our kinselves..good day..
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I love your blog! 😍
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Thank you so much. I am grateful that you love my blog. God bless you ❤️❤️
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A pleasure to read this creative and enlightening post. Keep them coming Princess!
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Thank you so much Mr. Brian. Your compliment always encourage me and fills with blessings. God bless you ⭐⭐
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You’re welcome, just look at your comments…you’re going places!🌹
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I agree Mr. Brian❤️💛
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A true love story. Thank you for sharing this insightful and moving piece with us.
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Thank you so much Nancy for beautiful compliment and encouragement. God bless you.
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https://ritikarasal.wordpress.com/2020/07/16/mystery-blogger-award/ I am nominating you for this award.
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Wow! This is beautiful. Keep it up Rasal
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Thank you so much for your lovely compliment Nathan. Sure🌟 God bless you.
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